Work in progress Alone in the Dark - Custom Story

**Valid Games** · 10-02-2014, 09:41 PM

(10-02-2014, 04:29 PM)Lazzer Wrote:
(10-02-2014, 02:14 PM)Psychopath Horse Wrote:
(10-02-2014, 08:56 AM)Lazzer Wrote: Best story ever.

Did you put that for a reason?

no, ofc not, that story is so deep and emotional that it made me drop a tear or two, the maps are looking brilliant as well as the puzzles do.

Criticism does not have to be rude. We know it is not the best, nor do we say it is. But we are already having tons of ideas of future things. If you'd pay attention to the thread you'd see that it's in "EARLY development". Also, it is 0% finished. The .rar file even has in it's name "in Development". Pay attention to detail next time, please.

EDIT: Oops, sorry. 1%.

(10-02-2014, 06:18 PM)MrBehemoth Wrote: Intriguing beginning for horror story, if done well it could be potentially interesting...

However... I would consider changing the title if I were you, because of this, this, this, this, this, this, and also this, not to mention this, this and even this and finally this.

Yes, I've noticed this. I am thinking of this suggestion seriously. As time goes by the story will get more intriguing. I stayed up all night, personally, and thought of ideas for future references. Needless to say, it will get good. Very good.

(10-02-2014, 01:03 PM)Streetboat Wrote: how do you get woken up by a note?

True, thank you for saying this. We will reword the description.