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[Hannibal]

I'm sorry, I didn't enjoy your custom story very much. I'm not sure whether this is the sort of feedback you want, but I will seek to explain why which may help you improve it.

+ A disappearing monster breaks the game rules without any reason.
+ No plot or storyline to immerse me in the experience.
+ No puzzle to wrap my brain around.
+ "Outside" was just a big white room with suite of armor.
+ I'm not sure whether I finished your custom story or not--in the intro you hint at no clear ending. I found 2 unusable keys, had 2 monster encounters, and stacked boxes to get into the overhead area. I opened every drawer, threw every object, etc. If I *DID* finish your level, some ending info would be great. If I *DIDN'T* finish your level then a memento or journal note hint would be nice.