Inferno (WIP) (Looking for a modeler)

[Tenacious]

There are some MAJOR issues you need to address:

1. Almost every room has more than enough lights. Your supposed to use lighting to your advantage, not flood a room full of it.
   
2. You used ALOT of empty scares. I would find myself turning around gasping at thin air.
   
3. Most events are triggered by picking up an item. Instead of triggering an event on item pick-up, vary it with some area triggers. I found myself preparing for an event everytime I picked up a key - not a very good tactic since you want to catch players off guard.
   
4. There were more than enough level errors to fill a good page or two. I've seen walls glitching with other walls, and cracks in the floor which allowed me to see into the bottomless world. Also you may want to check out the room with no lights in it what-so-ever - the light from one room bleeds into it through the wall.
   
5. The storyline confuses me. Is this during WWI or some other war? You may want to change it up a bit.
   
6. I lagged like crazy on certain parts of the map, particulary at the fountain in the middle of the room. That reminds me, why would you place a fountain in the middle of a room?
   
7. The monster scares were drawn out. I liked the first one after I entered that dark room, but it just got annoying from there on. In total there were four monster chases with three of them doing nothing but chasing you and disappearing.
   

I can go on, but seeing as this is a WIP, I don't want to judge it to it's fullest extent. Keep working on it - I'm sure you'll get the hang of it.