Experi-mental; my first story/map

[Ghostflame]

Was very nice exploring this one, and, again, the library is fantastic, i spent like 20 minutes in there admiring your work, must've taken a butt load of time to do *bows*. Anyway, this may only be me, but you know that purple flash when you progress? I found it to be doing that very often and was a minor distraction, just throwing that out there. Fix the grammar and make the maps structure abide by the laws of physics etc and I think we might have a nice new map coming. Great job.