My new custom story - The Visitor

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Whoops, where were the texture errors? were they things such as light bleeding through walls, flickering textures or sometthing else? thanks for the feedback!

Spoiler below!

The final chase I saw coming a mile off sadly,

yeah, it's very hard to scare the player with all of these custom stories out there, especially if you make maps yourself, because you know about triggers and such. I dont know if you noticed but I added loads of 'RandInt( , ); and RandFloat( , ); too try to overcome this in some parts, but I'm glad I got the effect intended with the cellar, It was inspired by my first encounter with the prison, having no idea where i'm going! Thanks for playing!