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RE: Mornenion (If you got a better name please tell me I need one)

(07-23-2011, 03:38 PM)MrCookieh Wrote: Since I don't know anything about the story, I can't say a lot about this.
But seeing the pictures:
1. Bedroom: There is a lot of free space. You can change that if you make the room smaller, or add some props, but since it is a bedroom, I would give u the advice to make it smaller.
2. Same for the prison (second and third picture). There is too much unused space.
But you already said, that you'll redo it.
3. The church looks quite nice, except the high use of blue torches Tongue

All in all, I want to give you a well meant advice: you make your rooms way too big, so it looks
very empty, and you're missing some details. Add those 'small' things into your rooms, so they look alive. Hope this helps Smile

Good luck on your project!

Thanks but,
Those pictures are very outdated.
We have a brand new bedroom,
Were about to make a new prison
Only the church is not outdated! Tongue
Castle is completely finished!

Current Project: Nightmare's End(Project Director, Scripter, boss >:D)
(This post was last modified: 07-23-2011, 04:29 PM by TheDavenia.)
07-23-2011, 04:26 PM
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Delete this please - by TheDavenia - 07-18-2011, 06:46 PM
RE: Mornenion (If you got a better name please tell me I need one) - by TheDavenia - 07-23-2011, 04:26 PM
RE: Mornenion - by TheDavenia - 07-25-2011, 12:37 PM
RE: Mornenion - by TheDavenia - 07-25-2011, 06:12 PM
RE: Mornenion - by skypeskype - 07-26-2011, 09:27 AM
RE: Mornenion - by TheDavenia - 07-26-2011, 12:11 PM
RE: Mornenion - by TheDavenia - 07-26-2011, 06:36 PM
RE: Mornenion - by TheDavenia - 07-26-2011, 01:17 PM



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