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Aftermath
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Aftermath

This is my first small custom story

Aftermath:

You are in the dungeon
he.. It.. killed your sister....
You are going to avenge your sister...


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download:

https://www.dropbox.com/s/9mxk0sokgcs44tk/Aftermath.rar


Enjoy! Big Grin
(This post was last modified: 08-22-2013, 03:48 PM by DCJK61.)
08-22-2013, 03:03 PM
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RE: Aftermath

pictures, describtion, looking just a little proffessional.

that is all
08-22-2013, 03:11 PM
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RE: Aftermath

did you remember to use boxlights?
08-22-2013, 04:45 PM
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RE: Aftermath

(08-22-2013, 04:45 PM)The Mug Wrote: did you remember to use boxlights?

i forgot to add them D:
08-22-2013, 04:54 PM
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RE: Aftermath

(08-22-2013, 04:54 PM)DCJK61 Wrote:
(08-22-2013, 04:45 PM)The Mug Wrote: did you remember to use boxlights?

i forgot to add them D:

Well... shit.
08-22-2013, 05:30 PM
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RE: Aftermath

(08-22-2013, 05:30 PM)lazz3r Wrote:
(08-22-2013, 04:54 PM)DCJK61 Wrote:
(08-22-2013, 04:45 PM)The Mug Wrote: did you remember to use boxlights?

i forgot to add them D:

Well... shit.


They are not realy important Big Grin
08-22-2013, 10:09 PM
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RE: Aftermath

(08-22-2013, 10:09 PM)DCJK61 Wrote:
(08-22-2013, 05:30 PM)lazz3r Wrote:
(08-22-2013, 04:54 PM)DCJK61 Wrote:
(08-22-2013, 04:45 PM)The Mug Wrote: did you remember to use boxlights?

i forgot to add them D:

Well... shit.


They are not realy important Big Grin

mm.. Wrong. Yes they are, one of the most important lights in HPL editor because if you don't have any boxlights added it's pitch black darkness and really annoying to play because you can't see shit then, even if you add pointlights or one option you have to add those really many to lighten up and make it visible to see on walls and all that stuff, what you want to explore.

“Life is a game, play it”
08-23-2013, 03:11 PM
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RE: Aftermath

"Aftermath" strong name for story but weak itself.
It really doesn't ring a bell.
"Random custom story w/ teleporting naked guyz and cheap jumpscares. part 100." would have made more sense.
I know that you're a newbie and you want to share your creations but don't copy the worst. This genre have been bored us almost to death.


I see potential on you and i've seen much worse stories, but you need to practice more, and come with better ideas, before posting something like this in the forum.
(This post was last modified: 08-23-2013, 07:55 PM by Red.)
08-23-2013, 05:02 PM
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RE: Aftermath

(08-23-2013, 03:11 PM)HumiliatioN Wrote:
(08-22-2013, 10:09 PM)DCJK61 Wrote:
(08-22-2013, 05:30 PM)lazz3r Wrote:
(08-22-2013, 04:54 PM)DCJK61 Wrote:
(08-22-2013, 04:45 PM)The Mug Wrote: did you remember to use boxlights?

i forgot to add them D:

Well... shit.


They are not realy important Big Grin

mm.. Wrong. Yes they are, one of the most important lights in HPL editor because if you don't have any boxlights added it's pitch black darkness and really annoying to play because you can't see shit then, even if you add pointlights or one option you have to add those really many to lighten up and make it visible to see on walls and all that stuff, what you want to explore.


Yeah but in Aftermath is enough light Tongue


Yeah but in this custom story is enough light

(08-23-2013, 05:02 PM)Pyöveli Wrote: "Aftermath" strong name for story but weak itself.
It really doesn't ring a bell.
"Random custom story w/ teleporting naked guyz and cheap jumpscares. part 100." would have made more sense.
I know that you're a newbie and you want to share your creations but don't copy the worst. This genre have been bored us almost to death.



I see potential on you and i've seen much worse stories, but you need to practice more, and come with better ideas, before posting something like this in the forum.

I made this custom story just 4 fun in 6 days Tongue


And i didnt copy anithing!
(This post was last modified: 08-23-2013, 10:16 PM by DCJK61.)
08-23-2013, 09:55 PM
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RE: Aftermath

(08-23-2013, 09:55 PM)DCJK61 Wrote:
(08-23-2013, 03:11 PM)HumiliatioN Wrote:
(08-22-2013, 10:09 PM)DCJK61 Wrote:
(08-22-2013, 05:30 PM)lazz3r Wrote:
(08-22-2013, 04:54 PM)DCJK61 Wrote: i forgot to add them D:

Well... shit.


They are not realy important Big Grin

mm.. Wrong. Yes they are, one of the most important lights in HPL editor because if you don't have any boxlights added it's pitch black darkness and really annoying to play because you can't see shit then, even if you add pointlights or one option you have to add those really many to lighten up and make it visible to see on walls and all that stuff, what you want to explore.


Yeah but in Aftermath is enough light Tongue


Yeah but in this custom story is enough light

(08-23-2013, 05:02 PM)Pyöveli Wrote: "Aftermath" strong name for story but weak itself.
It really doesn't ring a bell.
"Random custom story w/ teleporting naked guyz and cheap jumpscares. part 100." would have made more sense.
I know that you're a newbie and you want to share your creations but don't copy the worst. This genre have been bored us almost to death.



I see potential on you and i've seen much worse stories, but you need to practice more, and come with better ideas, before posting something like this in the forum.

I made this custom story just 4 fun in 6 days Tongue


And i didnt copy anithing!
If you make these for fun, don't paste them here, i don't think people
find this story "fun". This side of the forum is more serious. Paste them
in somewhere else like pewdiepie forum or something.
08-24-2013, 01:23 PM
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