[Amnesia: AMFP] Help A brother out?...Please?

[SnipersAngel]

Hello everyone, my name is Taryn and I'd like to steal your time!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GJHgEiPh_0Q
^ This is an Amnesia: A Machine for Pigs LP that I started and I am looking for feedback, good or bad. I am becoming much more seriously about growing myself and expanding my channel and I am a firm believer that you need to know the positives and negatives to become stronger, even if hearing negative feed back does suck.
So if you all have the time, I'd like it very much and appreciate it if you guys can give me some feedback and tell me how I might better improve!

Full Playlist of the other parts I have so far
http://www.youtube.com/playlist?feature=...TFqQY2L4rV

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