Cannibalism [RELEASED]

[Roy595]

Great job! This was my first custom story download, so I can't compare it to anything else. But, I really enjoyed it! There were a few moments I was pretty freaked out! The twist at the end was particularly nice, I don't think something like that is featured much in player-made content. No spelling or grammar mistakes particularly stood out to me, and I assume the note in the foreign guy's room was supposed to be badly written because English was not his first language.

One thing you did exceptionally well: building up the suspense and horror. It was paced fairly well with scares at just the right, unexpected moments. It would be interesting to see you make more custom stories.

Anyway, some constructive criticism: the monster could have made one or two more appearances. The map also did not have many puzzles, and at one point in the game you pick up a knife but I don't think you ever use it for anything. I didn't mind the piano music, it was pretty cool but it did drag on for a little too long. The one key bit in the cellar was creepy but it got a little annoying after awhile. It should have faded out after 30 seconds to a minute.

One last bit of complaint: the faithful servant "Bob". The name was just kind of... lame. It was actually a little amusing lol

Besides that, great job!