[WIP] Amnesia Custom Story: Mystery

[Artsy]

I'm confused...
Not to be rude but, your mapping skills need some work. As from what I can see the map looks very basic... try playing around with the tile properties and lighting. Use decals if you need them also, they help put detail into the maps. Decorating the rooms with even a little bit of detail could also make them seem more appealing.
There's really not much to see in those pics you provided. The rooms look really bland. If you want people to get interested in your CS, at least have something decent to show.

I'm just trying to help.
Take my advice or not, it is up to you to decide; this is your work.

Just please, for the sake of everything that's good don't let it be like you wake up in some place, on the way you get jumpscared a thousand times by the teleporting naked guys and that you need to get out of the castle/mansion/whatsoever etc. Stuff that's already been seen more than a million times. People are really getting tired of stories like that. Don't take this as a criticism, do as an advice instead.

Also good luck with your work.