Work in progress Amnesia Custom Story: Mystery

**Arvuti** · 10-24-2011, 11:01 AM

(10-24-2011, 09:57 AM)flamez3 Wrote:
(10-24-2011, 08:15 AM)flamez3 Wrote:
(10-24-2011, 08:10 AM)kman Wrote:
(10-24-2011, 07:33 AM)flamez3 Wrote:
(10-24-2011, 07:27 AM)kman Wrote: i find this a little hard to take seriously as you've now had 2 custom stories that were discontinued in the last 2 or 3 months...
You cant get better in this if you don't make mistakes. Redemption was discontinued at 9 maps, i just did not think that the story was any good (wake up in prison, why?) And the other one wasn't discontinued, it was more upgraded with a better map but with the same concept.
well i think if anything you should just stay with redemption and change the story around, just because you don't like the story doesn't mean you have to abandon the project. i mean with my custom story i know i've changed it around QUITE a lot but instead of changing projects i just adjusted it to match with the original plan. i'm not trying to be rude, just trying to help...
The maps were poorly made and had gotten feedback it wasn't good.
Any feedback? Is the lighting good......Good story?

Is the lighting good...uhm

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What the hell ?

get rid of those light rays, they look awful.