Screenshot criticism thread

[Acies]

(12-09-2011 03:18 PM)Juby Wrote:  Although I am not much good at making levels, below is a decent enough screenshot of my FC mod. I'm a scripter mainly and I anticipate around 3000 lines of code just for the first level when it is done. All around I would venture that the entire mod would be at least 5000 lines.


IMG - http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=vh3q50&s=5 [ made this despite my sickness ]
The curtains cut into the wall I just noticed as I posted >.<

Not to be raining on your parade, but the signs of a "good scripter" means optimizing the script into using as few lines as possible. I used 2700 lines of script for "Library of Alexandria", but that's just because I'm not such a strong scripter :>


As for the screenshot I'm unsure what to say. The lighting looks bland, as if lit by a boxlight only. The building itself doesn't look intriguing enough for me to get the "Ah, I want to play this" feeling. I do like the door though.

Don't take this criticism personally. Everyone has different standards and I'm sure there are people which will like it