The Small Horse II - The Abuse [Custom Story] Part A+B [UPDATED]

[Litronom]

This whole concept in this story is kind of dull. :/ To be honest to you.

Spoiler below!

First
of all: Starting was boring.. because you have to walk too much to get
stuff in certain areas and then you can progress slowly... and when
these naked guys attacked it was really buggy to get that stone and use
it to smash these bricks and you can too smash only with rock you don't
have to use that catapult at all.

Second area: Really big hall with couple really cheap and annoying scares and really confusing what to do next.

Final
area: Are you kidding me? I know it's funny to make some "sex scenes in
amnesia, but that was really odd what I saw. I get that humour
sometimes, but this time I don't.

Good things: Really like these
new models, couple new enemies, epic toy humour and new wall textures
and that stuff. That's good.

Overall: I didn't like
this one. It's not good. Sry I'm just honest now. But keep them coming
and improve stuff to make more sense to everything.

thank you for your honest critique. in the next part, ill take more effort,
especially on those huge maps and that you actually have a goal in view.
sorry if this wasnt like the previous stories. i had my eyes too much
on references here.

but again, thanks alot sir. i really need different opinions, either good or bad.

thank you for telling me about this story. it was all crazy, but i decently liked it.

Here is my playtrough:





Sorry its a bit too dark.

yep its sure is a bit dark. try a different render next time.