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[Amnesia] Screenshot criticism thread
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(03-24-2014, 09:36 AM)Nikson10 Wrote: What do you think?
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For me the first one, menu is awesome! Reminds me of Half Life 2 Citadel background for some reason xD

The second one, mansion seems nice detailed, though you could try adding some carpets to make the walls look nicer, same as in the third screenshot.

I don't have any other suggestions about the others, because they are simply awesome (allthrough a bit empty, try to fill 'em up with decals and some boxes.
03-24-2014, 11:02 AM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(03-24-2014, 11:02 AM)Lazzer Wrote:
(03-24-2014, 09:36 AM)Nikson10 Wrote: What do you think?
It's a full conversion I'm making.

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For me the first one, menu is awesome! Reminds me of Half Life 2 Citadel background for some reason xD

The second one, mansion seems nice detailed, though you could try adding some carpets to make the walls look nicer, same as in the third screenshot.

I don't have any other suggestions about the others, because they are simply awesome (allthrough a bit empty, try to fill 'em up with decals and some boxes.
Thanks, btw, i saw you're from Poland! Me too!
I'll try adding some more boxes and decals!
03-24-2014, 11:37 AM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(03-24-2014, 11:37 AM)Nikson10 Wrote:
(03-24-2014, 11:02 AM)Lazzer Wrote:
(03-24-2014, 09:36 AM)Nikson10 Wrote: What do you think?
It's a full conversion I'm making.

photos

For me the first one, menu is awesome! Reminds me of Half Life 2 Citadel background for some reason xD

The second one, mansion seems nice detailed, though you could try adding some carpets to make the walls look nicer, same as in the third screenshot.

I don't have any other suggestions about the others, because they are simply awesome (allthrough a bit empty, try to fill 'em up with decals and some boxes.
Thanks, btw, i saw you're from Poland! Me too!
I'll try adding some more boxes and decals!

That's nice Big Grin I think we need moar amnesia modders in Poland
03-24-2014, 11:49 AM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(03-24-2014, 09:36 AM)Nikson10 Wrote: What do you think?
It's a full conversion I'm making.

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I feel like this picture is a bit awkward with the lighting (the billboards). They shouldn't really come from 2 sources at once through the windows. We don't have 2 suns/moons, so I don't think this is naturally possible. I can only think this may occur if the outside is very bright and cloudy, creating an ambient light source. That, plus a dusty room like this, could perhaps create something like this, but I don't think that will be the first thing to come into people's minds when they see this.

You might also wanna add some support beams under the platforms and stairs so they don't look like they're floating.

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03-24-2014, 01:59 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Pictures I say Pictures!!

This is a Wizards Towers Off-Library. Sense has been made.

Edit - Much Newer Screenshots of it. Figured why repost, noone has said anything yet =P

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03-27-2014, 03:02 AM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

I'm just going to sneek in here and lay low. Need some help on this screenshot which is a very important part of the CS. Any idea's to improve? Tips or good things?

Updates on my CS are comming, Ive just been so bussy latly and im terible sorry!

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It looks a bit dark here, But there is a box light. Screenshots arn't realy the best.

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03-29-2014, 01:10 AM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

I like it, looks like a basement someone was using as a makeshift sleeping place.

Although it doesnt really look like that light is giving off light, perhaps an orange billboard?
A light dust PS as well?

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03-29-2014, 04:20 AM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Depending on how accessible it is, I would probably add a spider web decal somewhere Smile

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03-29-2014, 04:46 AM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

But those really glow in the dark.. like a lot.

Really white...

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03-29-2014, 08:15 AM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Whoops, thanks for the reminder! I actualy forgot to lit the lamp again overlookt that. And il also add some decals on the roof indeed. Its quite bare too.

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03-29-2014, 12:59 PM
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