Scared chapter_1(NEW CS)Abandoned

[TheStillRock]

This is my very first custom story I ever posted. It took me 2 weeks to do this. Its short because I didn't want to make a long one that people don't like. Tell me what you think and ill make chapter two, which will be longer and better.

The objective is to get the key from the cellar and leave the castle.

Heres the download link:
PLEASE DONT GO BACK INTO THE BEDROOM SECTION IT CRASHES! caps so you will see

http://www.mediafire.com/?6rfji6ufmffc6d8

Fixed castle crash.
The file is 34mb because of the the monster,sound, and music.

Here are some pics

http://i1158.photobucket.com/albums/p605...47-625.jpg


http://i1158.photobucket.com/albums/p605...34-304.jpg


http://i1158.photobucket.com/albums/p605...47-022.jpg


http://i1158.photobucket.com/albums/p605...ot_000.jpg

[flamez3]

It looks good from the screenshot's, but I would try and detailing the maps a bit more; it looks like some of the places are mostly empty?

[TheStillRock]

(01-12-2012 02:28 AM)flamez3 Wrote:  It looks good from the screenshot's, but I would try and detailing the maps a bit more; it looks like some of the places are mostly empty?

Some spots are empty, I know. like I said its my first try. The next one will be better tho thanks for commenting

[HoLLiGuN]

Its good.. but for some reason leaving the castle made my desktop crash :c

[TheStillRock]

(01-12-2012 09:37 AM)HoLLiGuN Wrote:  Its good.. but for some reason leaving the castle made my desktop crash :c

Oh which door did you do ill check it out and fix it.

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(01-12-2012 02:12 PM)TheStillRock Wrote:  

(01-12-2012 09:37 AM)HoLLiGuN Wrote:  Its good.. but for some reason leaving the castle made my desktop crash :c

Oh which door did you do ill check it out and fix it.

I found it i made that door go into an unknown map.

[Dark Knight]

hmmm.. nice story!


- notes without text
- doors without names and no sounds of opening keys
- when i go back from first area back to door (there is only one) - game crashes

anyway, i like pathnode of justine monster, patrolling in cellar, that was great scary and funny time!

[TheStillRock]

(01-12-2012 08:18 PM)Dark Knight Wrote:  hmmm.. nice story!


- notes without text
- doors without names and no sounds of opening keys
- when i go back from first area back to door (there is only one) - game crashes

anyway, i like pathnode of justine monster, patrolling in cellar, that was great scary and funny time!

Thanks i know that was just the first chapter the next one will be better with sounds and text. will take atleast 2 to 3 weeks tho i might put out a demo sooner or later

[HoLLiGuN]

Dark knight posted:
- when i go back from first area back to door (there is only one) - game crashes


This.
But overall it has potential (:

[alexej000]

Good CS but there is only one zombie

[alexej000]

I wait for chapter 2 bro !