Forever Lost Preview

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Original thread.

I am working on a custom story and kinda request some feed back.

This is not the final product at all (I have never been that good at story writing).

Page on my site.

Demo download.

Edit:

Screens

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Lets plays:

Demo
[1][2][3] {1.2} by TheIvanplenca (waqas12346)
[1] {1.2} by Realalover (???}

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Bump for feedback.

[Dark Knight]

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very short map. and you can add for monster pathnode - more longer, imho

nice thing - fish in room!

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(08-19-2011 08:20 AM)Dark Knight Wrote:  Pitfall
very short map. and you can add for monster pathnode - more longer, imho

nice thing - fish in room!

I found out they don't need to be in water and then it came to me...
"What would happen if I filled a wardrobe full of them!?"

Edit:

I am planning to release the final preview tomorrow (Witch will be all of the first map and maybe part of the second).

Edit 2:

The monster in the map is just a hallucination (changed in final preview).

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Update:

The final version of the preview is available, It includes all of the first map. Feedback would be nice (the end parts of the map are a little empty but I am just sick of working on this map and pressed to get the final preview out ASAP).

[HumiliatioN]

If this is your first project ever. You did there pretty good job. No need to complain of anything everything was goodly maded.

It was short but as I can see very good Prewiew / Demo. Very nice

Waiting full release!

Fish closet was funny

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(08-20-2011 01:22 AM)HumiliatioN Wrote:  If this is your first project ever.

It is.

[Kurton]

Those fish probably freaked me out more than most monster encounters ( ﾟДﾟ)

[zeravia]

well...dude... thius looks good from the comments i am reading.

I'll make an LP of it. ^_^ you will be #four today. lol

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Preview of what I am working on.

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It feels nice to be working on a new map.