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[WIP] The shadow (Amnesia: TDD sequel) [IFC]

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Work in progress The shadow (Amnesia: TDD sequel) [IFC]
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RE: The shadow (Amnesia: TDD sequel) [IFC]

Just for the sake of a good looking intro:

Spoiler below!

"...I found him in his mansion cover in blood and a couple..."
Change cover to covered.

"He has no memory off how he meet Alexander..."
Change off to of.

"...stop the shadow but I have now idea what it is."
Change now to no.

And this one was my favourite..
"...tell me stories about his time in a castle called Bennenburg..."
Change Bennenburg to Brennenburg. I find it funny because it is spelt correctly later.. Tongue

There's a few past vs present tense issues, but very minor - wouldn't worry about them as they are hardly noticeable. Smile


Looks promising though, keeping my eye on this!
Discord: Romulator#0001
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05-27-2014, 10:30 PM
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The shadow (Amnesia: TDD sequel) [IFC] - by Skyy - 05-27-2014, 04:41 PM
RE: The shadow (Amnesia: TDD sequel) [IFC] - by Romulator - 05-27-2014, 10:30 PM



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