Check out my custom story :D

[Tottel]

Not so bad for a first story.
You can fill it up with more stuff to make it more interesting; but as you said: it's work in progress.

Btw, I wouldn't have thought you were 13 until you mentioned it with caps lock on. Don't do that.
Also, as a tip for your story, you're making it very easy for the player. The stone is just outside of the door, the note says where exactly the key is.

Also, "i" is written with a capital letter "I". For your notes.. Just saying.