Facing The Darkness Chapter 1

[DnALANGE]

hERE IS MY FEEDBACK:
Looks great to me,
1.Just make some particles and decals...
Those together will make a much better experiance..
2. At the start there is a VERY B I G letter...
in my opinion... people are not gonna read the whole letter,, make it shorter or cut it into a couple letters.
3. In the map with the mixing machine.. the is a room with NO ceiling.. always double\triple-check ur cs before uploading.
4. ps... DON'T PUT KEY'S WHERE NORMALLY AREN'T KEY, example.. on the of a shelf behind some books or stuff like that.. { youre doing that }
5. Overall... 7-10 scripting looks very good to me.
DnALANGE.