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[Part1] Tri-Orb
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RE: [Part1] Tri-Orb

(11-01-2012, 12:53 AM)dnalange Wrote: OK.. Finished it..
Looks OK for me.
Scripting are simpel but your first CS so also alright!
Mapping.... also looking OK..
Spoiler below!
Scares were fine but try not to make poofers
NOT OK = i had like 4 things is my inventory when i finished...
Things were i guess...
1= 2 orbs
2= a key
3= carbon thing?
and oh.. Don't put YOU: ....text....
Looks really odd to me.. Looks like someone's talking to you..
Overall rate : 6½ - 10
Try to build some more rooms\details\bigger scripts.
I know it takes a LOOOT of time but it will be worth it.
I know , i just started making custom stories. But i hope that i will improve in the next one.
Also thanks for feedback Shy

I help people when i'm bored :U


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11-01-2012, 06:08 AM
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Messages In This Thread
[Part1] Tri-Orb - by naseem142 - 10-31-2012, 08:07 PM
RE: [Part1] Tri-Orb - by Statyk - 10-31-2012, 08:56 PM
RE: [Part1] Tri-Orb - by naseem142 - 10-31-2012, 09:24 PM
RE: [Part1] Tri-Orb - by DnALANGE - 10-31-2012, 10:15 PM
RE: [Part1] Tri-Orb - by HumiliatioN - 10-31-2012, 11:42 PM
RE: [Part1] Tri-Orb - by DnALANGE - 11-01-2012, 12:53 AM
RE: [Part1] Tri-Orb - by naseem142 - 11-01-2012, 06:08 AM
RE: [Part1] Tri-Orb - by The chaser - 11-01-2012, 10:51 PM
RE: [Part1] Tri-Orb - by naseem142 - 11-06-2012, 05:17 PM
RE: [Part1] Tri-Orb - by The chaser - 11-06-2012, 10:11 PM
RE: [Part1] Tri-Orb - by Crafted - 11-09-2012, 10:51 AM
RE: [Part1] Tri-Orb - by naseem142 - 11-09-2012, 01:56 PM



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