Your second custom story have much better and interesting. Example that start when player was speaking that man behind that door and there was conversations and one little quest to complete.
End was nice and quick but there are little flaws, little bug textures misplaced some places then this "Unlock doors with keys with same story over and over" etc.
I'ts not bad story at all i found something cool and original on this story.
It was nice, little longer and scary some places.
Anyways positives things:
- That quest on beginning
- Conversations
- Darkness and atmosphere
Negative things:
- Too many zombies
- Same unlock door with keys stuff
Anyways this is my opinion and this was great story! Make more and longer and something puzzles then it will be awesome and decent story
Nice job on this one! I'm happy