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[Amnesia] Screenshot criticism thread
Romulator Offline
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(03-17-2014, 12:04 AM)Kia Wrote: (I had to do it for this screenshot)

I'm sorry Kia, but I am stealing that screenshot. It puts my desktop wallpaper to shame D':

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03-17-2014, 01:03 PM
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Echohalls Offline
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

This is something i started working on a couple hours back.
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03-17-2014, 10:16 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(03-17-2014, 10:16 PM)Echohalls Wrote: This is something i started working on a couple hours back.
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Boo, a daylight map. In amnesia. The sun... it burns aaaghhhhh Sad
Moar horror moaaaaar. Night. Candles. Moon. Beasts. Lantern. Moaaaaar horroooor :<

Uhm joking. Nice map. You are new here and already mapping? Nice. I dont know what to say because i never made a daytime map...
Maybe play around with billboards and lights to make the sun look epic? (Take a look at kias weekend competition entry. Love it.)

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SOMA WHY ARE YOU SO BEAUTIFUL? ;_;
03-17-2014, 10:28 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

(03-17-2014, 10:16 PM)Echohalls Wrote: This is something i started working on a couple hours back.
Spoiler below!
[Image: nsy7o3r.jpg]

Flowers please. Smile
03-17-2014, 10:55 PM
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Echohalls Offline
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Did some small editing with the lighting
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03-17-2014, 11:07 PM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

It looks very nice. think about adding more foliage.
Flowers, ferns and different size of grass. Remember you can scale any kind of foliage to variate it.

Right now all windows are black. An idea is too see if it's possible to be able to see into some of the rooms. A livingroom with a stove, sofa, shelf with books and some chairs and paintings. Not very big, just to show that this is a house, and not just a wall. Giving it some depth.

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03-18-2014, 08:01 AM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

I'm conflicted.. I prefer the left of this one, http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2014/0...7adwfw.png
but the right of this one...
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2014/0...7a82e2.png

What do do?

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03-18-2014, 08:12 AM
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Where there's something you prefer, there's also something you don't prefer.
I'd go with the first one since the billboards look much better on the right, and the left is darker and more mysterious.

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03-18-2014, 08:17 AM
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7heDubz Offline
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Gotta go with the second, the billboard is to much of a dealbreaker

03-18-2014, 08:41 AM
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Echohalls Offline
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread

Edited the map a bit more, added some more foliage and things.

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