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Amnesia : The Doomed Mansion DEMO!
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jessehmusic Offline
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(04-12-2012 02:24 PM)Datguy5 Wrote:  I wont download this because of 2 reasons:No pics(its a demo is a terrible excuse like Kaizy said) and the download link is strange.Change it to mediafire or dropbox.
how does mediafire work then ?
i only know Speedyshare

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04-12-2012 05:11 PM
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RE: Amnesia : The Doomed Mansion DEMO!

(04-12-2012 05:11 PM)jessehmusic Wrote:  
(04-12-2012 02:24 PM)Datguy5 Wrote:  I wont download this because of 2 reasons:No pics(its a demo is a terrible excuse like Kaizy said) and the download link is strange.Change it to mediafire or dropbox.
how does mediafire work then ?
i only know Speedyshare
Im not sure do you need an account there(i have one just in case).But you just basically click upload button and then you just select a file from your files.I always convert the files i want to upload into zip format with winrar.

04-12-2012 06:25 PM
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Zipi Offline
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(04-12-2012 02:24 PM)Datguy5 Wrote:  I wont download this because of 2 reasons:No pics(its a demo is a terrible excuse like Kaizy said) and the download link is strange.Change it to mediafire or dropbox.
That in another way is kinda a bad excuse... Everyone uses different uploading sites, Megaupload is gone now you have to trust other uploading sites..
04-12-2012 06:25 PM
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(04-12-2012 01:34 PM)Cranky Old Man Wrote:  
(04-12-2012 11:00 AM)jessehmusic Wrote:  no way i dont like Pewdiepie at all -.-
I don't believe you - the mansion is owned by Martin.
Why would Martin has something to do with PiewDiePie

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04-12-2012 06:30 PM
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(04-12-2012 06:30 PM)jessehmusic Wrote:  
(04-12-2012 01:34 PM)Cranky Old Man Wrote:  
(04-12-2012 11:00 AM)jessehmusic Wrote:  no way i dont like Pewdiepie at all -.-
I don't believe you - the mansion is owned by Martin.
Why would Martin has something to do with PiewDiePie
Martin is PDPs name for the naked corpse. Every time somebody mentions Martin, he goes "Martin! How nice to meet you!" in Swedish. It's as unlikely as you picking Stephano as the owner, and add to that that the first scare is a flying Jesus barrel, and that you can find the arabian statue in the first room, it's just impossible that you managed to build a PDP map without wanting to.

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(This post was last modified: 04-12-2012 07:16 PM by Cranky Old Man.)
04-12-2012 07:16 PM
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jessehmusic Offline
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Ah , never watch PDP i watch Morfar Big Grin

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04-12-2012 07:38 PM
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Nickshrike Offline
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RE: Amnesia : The Doomed Mansion DEMO!

(04-12-2012 07:16 PM)Cranky Old Man Wrote:  
(04-12-2012 06:30 PM)jessehmusic Wrote:  
(04-12-2012 01:34 PM)Cranky Old Man Wrote:  
(04-12-2012 11:00 AM)jessehmusic Wrote:  no way i dont like Pewdiepie at all -.-
I don't believe you - the mansion is owned by Martin.
Why would Martin has something to do with PiewDiePie
Martin is PDPs name for the naked corpse. Every time somebody mentions Martin, he goes "Martin! How nice to meet you!" in Swedish. It's as unlikely as you picking Stephano as the owner, and add to that that the first scare is a flying Jesus barrel, and that you can find the arabian statue in the first room, it's just impossible that you managed to build a PDP map without wanting to.
Martin isn't exactly an unpopular name, I know people called Martin, does that make them related to Pewdiepie?

I don't think it's necessarily automatically a bad map even if a map is made for Pewdiepie (even though the majority of maps made for Pewdiepie do suck).

I'll give this game a go and give my opinion on it but I don't really think an unfinished custom story should be released.

EDIT:

Ok, I played the first part, the map could do with a ton of improvement, I have listed some suggestions and notes below.

Spoiler below!

Might want some proof reading on all your notes and stuff, i'd be happy to that if you wanted.
It's coming off as a joke map, is that what you want?
I expected first monster to poof because of the way the custom story seemed, can't be a good thing.
Wouldn't hurt to add some proper paths for the monsters so they don't get stuck.
Everything was a bit symmetrical at times, jars wouldn't be lined up completely neatly in real life.
I think to progress I had to press all these buttons right? One of the drawers wouldn't open for some reason, I assume a button was in one of them?
Try adding something a bit more unique to your map, jump scares are hated by many but there are people who can use them and still have a serious map, just don't overdo it. If you wanna make jump scares and a joke map and all, try and do something nobody has done before, add some new models in to the game, chuck a theme into the game, just make it different so it stands out.
After checking your scripting I found it is a little sloppy, try adding some comments to show what a particular bit of code does and name some of your variables and objects and all a little better, if you come back in a month time and want to edit a particular bit of code you probably wont know what bit to edit.


I'll add some more suggestions as I continue through the map.
(This post was last modified: 04-13-2012 08:15 AM by Nickshrike.)
04-12-2012 08:37 PM
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RE: Amnesia : The Doomed Mansion DEMO!

No...

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04-12-2012 09:05 PM
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Kaizy Offline
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(04-12-2012 10:55 AM)Cranky Old Man Wrote:  Review:
This is another fan-made PDP map.
WELP I'm out

I play Amnesia Custom Stories a couple times a week on Livestream
Its great fun
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04-12-2012 10:31 PM
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Ahiam94 Offline
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Ugh, a PDP map, I really don't care for those. If that's your thing then fine, but as for me, I prefer REAL scares and not random barrels coming from everywhere.

I want a Flugelhorn!
04-13-2012 03:44 AM
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