Amnesia : The Doomed Mansion DEMO!

[Nickshrike]

Umm, this isn't a Pewdiepie map....
I didn't find it fun though, but it's worth trying to help the map maker to improve their map making skills.

[jessehmusic]

(04-13-2012 08:12 AM)Nickshrike Wrote:  Umm, this isn't a Pewdiepie map....
I didn't find it fun though, but it's worth trying to help the map maker to improve their map making skills.

I'v got help with scripting for this map
and will try fix my maping skills but i dont have so good ideas when it comes do dungeon on Map3 and Mansion can i be like half way to Medium

And im working with Two stories atm , Doomed and Hospital (Hospital is gonna be modern time amnesia)

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(04-12-2012 02:24 PM)Datguy5 Wrote:  I wont download this because of 2 reasons:No pics(its a demo is a terrible excuse like Kaizy said) and the download link is strange.Change it to mediafire or dropbox.

i have changed it check the link

[Cranky Old Man]

(04-12-2012 07:38 PM)jessehmusic Wrote:  Ah , never watch PDP i watch Morfar

Ah, that explains it, because Morfar probably stole it from PDP.

[jessehmusic]

(04-13-2012 06:10 PM)Cranky Old Man Wrote:  

(04-12-2012 07:38 PM)jessehmusic Wrote:  Ah , never watch PDP i watch Morfar

Ah, that explains it, because Morfar probably stole it from PDP.

PDP isnt good , when he dosnt get scared he screams anyway ? wtf

[Cranky Old Man]

(04-13-2012 06:23 PM)jessehmusic Wrote:  PDP isnt good , when he dosnt get scared he screams anyway ? wtf

Okay, I can give watching Morfar another try, but at first glance I found them pretty similar. PDP was just more over-the-top.
Edit after watching: Well, he's about half a PDP. Jokes really have no place in Amnesia or Amnesia LPs.

[Nickshrike]

Skipped map1 as I couldn't find all the buttons, finished the demo now.

Spoiler below!

The door you come from doesn't say anything if you click on it, could be a nice touch just to say something like: "I don't want to go back there" or whatever.
A box on a shelf which doesn't fit.
Again, you need some massive proof reading on your notes as they tend to have lots of spelling and grammar errors.
When the player was forced to die, could you not have just made the player still able to move but impossible to escape? That way you still fear the enemy. This is a nice thing to do as it's different from the majority of custom stories but it felt like you just copied that idea from the main game.
Try and add something a bit more unique to the rest of the story, and possibly try making it a bit more serious.

Don't release a demo again, I think you should just release the full story when it's ready, no problem with sending a demo to your friends/testers though to see if they like it.

[davidthefox]

I played this map and gave it a try, made a short playthrough (dont worry i will link it) but i hit a dead end, when you are in the room with teh coffins there is not way to get out, your basically trapped

[jessehmusic]

(04-14-2012 11:25 PM)davidthefox Wrote:  I played this map and gave it a try, made a short playthrough (dont worry i will link it) but i hit a dead end, when you are in the room with teh coffins there is not way to get out, your basically trapped

there is a key in the coffins search there!

[davidthefox]

(04-15-2012 01:05 AM)jessehmusic Wrote:  

(04-14-2012 11:25 PM)davidthefox Wrote:  I played this map and gave it a try, made a short playthrough (dont worry i will link it) but i hit a dead end, when you are in the room with teh coffins there is not way to get out, your basically trapped

there is a key in the coffins search there!

I did, The key did not work on the door

[Dark Knight]

(04-16-2012 03:33 PM)davidthefox Wrote:  

(04-15-2012 01:05 AM)jessehmusic Wrote:  

(04-14-2012 11:25 PM)davidthefox Wrote:  I played this map and gave it a try, made a short playthrough (dont worry i will link it) but i hit a dead end, when you are in the room with teh coffins there is not way to get out, your basically trapped

there is a key in the coffins search there!

I did, The key did not work on the door

yes, i stuck here too!

the key in coffin - doesn"t suits to the door.

please FIX it!!
so demo was good